Here are the first seven sentences from my WIP, tentatively titled The Golden Bride. I’d love to hear what you think of it. I’ll be giving away to once commenter their choice of a paperback copy or a ebook copy of Tame A Wild Bride.
It was her last resort. Either this or prostitution and she didn’t choose prostitution. She couldn’t raise MaryAnn in that environment, nor if truth be told, could she live like that. At least this way there would be some stability in her little girl’s life.
Sarah turned the knob, took a deep breath and walked through the door to a better future for her daughter and, if she was lucky, for herself.
The office was small and neat. A single desk with a straight, high backed wooden chair in front of it was in the middle of the room.
Great start. I’m sure many women have come up against that choice.
Looking forward to reading this.
Cora Blu
Wow! Nice job capturing what must have been a decision many women had to face in history. Now where is the rest of it:-)
Intriguing.
Tease! LOL Now I want to read more! I agree with the others who have posted already. Great job in capturing a very tough decision that many women have been faced with in the past, and unfortunately, many are still faced with today.
Now get cracking with the rest of the WIP so that we can read it! 🙂
Grabbed me right away!!!
Awesome start…definitely pulls me in from the first word!
This is only a suggestion. Take it or leave it.
This arrangement was her last resort. It was either this or prostitution, and she really didn’t want to choose prostitution. She couldn’t see raising MaryAnn in that environment, nor if truth be told, could she live like that. At least with him there would be some stability in her little girl’s life, but could she live with the consequences.