This is from my WIP Redeemed by a Rebel, from the Destiny in Deadwood series.
Structures of every size lined the main street. Tents were thrown up in front of the buildings. The largest of the buildings were the Gem Theater, the Grand Hotel and the Bella Union. Weary miners could spend their hard earned gold on liquor, women and games of chance in the saloons and whorehouses of the Gem and the Bella Union. Places where they could remember easier, happier times when they were farmers, ranchers, lawyers and sailors. The people came from all walks of life, having given up or lost everything in the Panic of 1873.
I’d love your comments on my scene. Can you see it? If not, give me some insight into what I need. I’ll be forever grateful.
Hi Cindy,
Yes, I can “see” it…. very colorful description. Couldn’t help thinking, too, it could soon refer to our current times instead of a historical setting!
I love the vivid description. I can picture it and imagine the miners, weary and ready to let loose.